I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, November 27, 2019
Subjects I want at school
Today we have to make a blog post about what subject in school we want to have. I have chosen to pick swimming because in Dunedin I used to do lots of competitions.but when I moved up to Christchurch I didn't do as much to remember because there were a lot of things going on and school and at home. I really want swimming to be a subject at school because I really think I could become a really good swimmer and eventually might make it into the Olympics if I'm lucky.

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Kia ora Evelyn!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this post on your blog. I think Swimming is a great subject that could be offered in schools, especially this time of the year! I bet you are looking forward to our upcoming Jellie Park trip then!
Thank you for sharing your blog work with us.
- Miss Birtch
Bula Evelyn
ReplyDeleteGood work on this blog post. I think you should work on your punctuation because there are some mistakes in your writing. Have a nice day. linny