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Wednesday, September 5, 2018

The amazing body

For the last 3 week  we have been looking at The Human Body. My topic group is looking at three body  systems. The Endocrine System, The  Circulatory System and the Skeletal system. We are looking at these system because this term is all about the body.

I have made a DLO about the three body system I learnt.

11 comments:

  1. Evening Evelyn,The human body,what a cool topic to learn about.I like the use of the colored background. It's not too dark so you are still able to read your writing.I like learning new things and from your blog I learnt that your marrow makes the red blood cells.You mentioned that we have 206 bones when we are growing up. How many bones do we start with? Have a good day.

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    1. Hi Mrs Cassidy this is Evelyn thank you for commenting on my blog. I am not really sure but I think it's 305. Do you think you know exact amount could you tell me pleas?

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  2. hey Evelyn comment on my blog and my friends here is the link https://hpsebonys.blogspot.com/
    and if you comment on my blog i will coment on your blog

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  3. Hi Evelyn. I really like the way that you have put in your facts that you know. All I wanted to say to you was that you have to check some of your spelling.I really like your DLO that you have made. You have learnt lot's and lots about the body. Over all ther rest is fine.

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  4. The rest is fine. Not Ther rest is fine. Sorry for that.

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  5. Hi Evelyn ,I think people need to know more about the endocrine system in New Zealand. The they would not go to macDonalds and Burger king to eat. Great colour's and your spelling has improved lots. I still want to know what the 6 parts of the body are?

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    1. Hi daddy this is Evelyn thank you for commenting on my blog. I have made a neater document on my blog that is called the body system.

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  6. great work on the body system evei.

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    1. Hi Jenee,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog. I really appreciate that. Jenee you forgot to link you name and to put a helpful, thoughtful and positive comment. Thank you for commenting.

      Jenee may a ask are you from a school or someone's parent.

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    2. May I ask not May a ask.

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  7. Hi Evelyn, thanks for sharing your learning. I like the way you set your work out, it was easy to read. I did not know we have 206 bones in our body. To make your blogs even better, check your spelling before posting.

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