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Monday, November 26, 2018

In my own words

W.A.L.T: read information and then re-write the important parts in our own words.

This is the paragraph I read about Armistice Day.

"At 11am on 11 November this year, Aotearoa New Zealand marked the centenary of the armistice that ended the First World War in 1918. On that day 100 years ago, after four years of brutal conflict, war finally gave way to peace."- From https://ww100.govt.nz/armistice

This is the paragraph that I re-wrote i my own words.

In Aotearoa New Zealand on the 11 of November 1918 at 11am the First World war ended 100 years ago and finally baring peace to the world.


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