This week we have been learning about written forms.
W.A.L.T how to use an ad using strategy written form.
Here is a video that I did.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, May 21, 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Evelyn When google checks me out and i am allowed to view the video,I will comment.
ReplyDeleteHope to see a written story about 4 months in Fiji on your blog soon.
Love Dad
PS, What is the name of the place begging with H had the Marae you visited at Plimmerton Wellington and what is the name of the local tangata whenua iwi?
Hi Evelyn,
ReplyDeleteI can't see your video that you made but I bet it was awesome and amazing. But next time you might need to fix some of the things up top you have written because it didn't make sense. Also you might need to add some more information up top but other than those 2 it was perfect.
Hi Evelyn,
ReplyDeleteI really like that you know what standard written form is. Do you think that it is easier than using other things to work it out. Next time you make a video you should hear what the video is saying because some of the video doesn't make cents. Other than that you did really good.
Hi Tasharn this is Evelyn thank you for commenting on my blog I hop you learn something about written forms .
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